Literary doodle pad



Those words, three…

By Lovers’ Lane.

I’d fallen headlong,

Not that I’d known long,

At least,

Not with my brain.

You’d had a head-start,

Caught unawares my heart,

And now?

Those three remain.

x ♥ x


Comments on: "This Transparent Tumble" (6)

  1. Like looking at a confluence of 2 tracks of footprints and realising they’d been tracking together for a while?. Now, how cute; those telltales and toes! 😉 xxx
    ps …and the funny bowls and scuffs in the sand…where you fell headlong or a little wrestling of tickles? x

  2. Fantastic poem, Catie. Really beautifully worded. x

  3. I want to like this again 🙂 xXx

  4. Just remembered this. ❤ It gives me hope.

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